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maya 💗's avatar

this is so amazing! I really appreciate finding stories like this to read and connecting with fellow fiction writers. keep writing! im so inspired by the way you so skillfully create detailed imagery in your words!

Berna's avatar

awww your comment being this thoughtful and detailed genuinely made me so happy🥹 it felt incredibly valuable and encouraging to me. thank you sooo much <3

Kshitija's avatar

You rarely see fiction on Substack, so I’m really glad you wrote this one! And I will never tire of saying how much I adore your writing for make me so clearly imagine the worlds you paint with your words 😩 it’s so so beautiful!!

Berna's avatar

your comment feels so thoughtful and meaningful, thank you sooo much🥹 and oh my god, hearing your thoughts genuinely softens my heart so much💕✨